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Ernie Brill's avatar

I am certified schizophrenic but I prefer to call it FOUR in One. I specialize in POVwriting and one my pov stories was performed on PBS in the "With Ruby (Dee) and Ossie (DAVIS) show. My two best writing "mentors" through my life time were such pov masterpieces as "The Sound And The Fury", "To The Lighthouse", and "Cane". In reading our comments I felt four diferent angers/feel bad foryou.

a) You gush, ie you go on and on. It could be considered

1)enthusiastic

2) a person who has no boundaries and does not know when to stop

3) one of thousands of computer victims of computerspeeditis that ruins any considered nuance or cadence and unconsciously declares war on the succinct (does not exist in your writing) and worse, the considerate. Dd you think everyone has the time to read your gushing before you get to our point or are you looking for it as you type away.

You and Ben need to reevaluate your title- While Waiting To Die. It is infectious. And I dont want to die waiting for you to get to the point or at least to the end of the sentence.

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A CRONE WITH A BOTTLE. Or two.'s avatar

but you lived to write a hilarious post about it!

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